Friday, August 25, 2017
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I like your use of the words 'comfortable' and 'delicious'.
ReplyDeleteI would've liked some more detail on what the other animals were doing when you watched them, but laughed about your mum.
Next time you could perhaps vary the length and structure of your sentences.
Gail Boyce Papakura High